Post by Marcus on Apr 13, 2011 17:58:21 GMT -5
Hey, guys. DWoW's Ray here, and this will probably be the only forum I don't actually play Ray at! 
Anyway, here we go.
YOUR BASICS
Name: Marcus
Alias: None available
Gender: Male
Age: 13 (human years)
Height: 1'3"
Weight: 19 pounds
Appearance: Marcus is a small red fox with scruffy fur, black-tipped ears, a white muzzle and chest fur, dark red paws, and a white-tipped tail.
Picture (optional):
He's the one on the left. The one on the right is his sister, Kara.
YOUR BACKGROUND
Mother: Vixey.
Father: Tod.
Any Siblings?: A younger sister named Kara.
YOUR PERSONALITY
Basic Personality: Marcus takes after Tod in that he is adventurous and mischievous, but he is also a bit naive and doesn't quite understand everything that goes on around him. He is kind, especially to his timid sister and friends, but is also known for having a bit of a temper. He means well, but more often than not his mischievousness leads him and his friends to getting into trouble. Marcus is also known for having a bit of a reckless streak. It is only because he cares about his friends that he is willing to put himself in danger should he ever find himself in it. It wouldn't be all that off to call him a bit cocky as well, thinking that simply because he is a fox he is able to get out of any sort of trouble thrown at him.
Likes: Adventure, exploring, his sister Kara, fish, and goofing around with friends.
Dislikes: Having nothing to do, rain, and anything having to do with romance.
Fears: Marcus doesn't fear much at this moment in time, but is wary of hunters as a result of Tod and Vixey telling him and Kara to avoid them at all costs. He is a bit mistrusting of humans as a result.
Hopes and Dreams: He longs to be a great explorer and travel the world with Kara.
Temperment: Most of the time Marcus is easygoing and more than willing to make a friend or two. He hardly is one to get into a fight, but if he is pushed past his limits he isn't afraid to let his temper flare. For the most part, though, those occasions are rare.
YOUR STORY
History: After Tod and Copper went their separate ways, Tod settled down with Vixey in the forest. They lived a happy life there, undisturbed for the most part and ready to start a family. Several months later, Vixey became the proud mother of two kits. The oldest was a male that Tod named Marcus, while the younger of the two was a female that Vixey named Kara. It was noted from Marcus' birth that the little kit seemed to be quite the mischief maker. This proved to be quite the case, as when he was old enough to start walking he began to sneak out of the den and go exploring in the forest, usually bringing Kara along with him to try and bring her out of her shell.
As Marcus grew older, his adventurous streak didn't seem to be crushed any. No, it seemed he only became more adventurous as he got older. He grew bored with the calm nature of the forest and wanted to see more of the world. Tod warned him about the world beyond the forest, saying there were humans beyond the safety of the trees and den that wouldn't hesitate to kill either Marcus or Kara. Marcus didn't quite understand, but promised he would keep an eye out for hunters and be wary of any new creatures he came across.
Marcus' adventuring led him far away from the safety of the forest one day, as he got past the barrier that divided the forest from the rest of the world and unintentionally hitched a ride on a car heading toward an unknown destination. As soon as the car stopped, Marcus got off and decided to explore the surrounding area. He came upon a vast expanse of water and, being curious as he was, decided to investigate. The water was a bit too strong for him and he soon found himself swept away, waking up hours later on a mysterious island. Marcus saw the occurrence as a chance to truly find out if he was a great adventurer or not, even without Kara by his side, and so he welcomes any challenge the island has to offer.
JUDGEMENT
Sample Post: Marcus groaned, feeling quite groggy from getting jostled about in the open water and really having no idea where he was. It took a few moments, but the kit soon realized he hadn't dreamed up his exploration away from the forest. This was real. Getting to his feet, Marcus shook the water from his fur and looked around. It soon became apparent that, much to his disappointment, Kara hadn't followed him. "Well, this is just peachy. What am I supposed to do now?" Marcus asked.
It then dawned on him. He was no longer in his familiar forest. He'd done good! "Ha! This just proves I was meant to be an explorer! I don't need mom and dad telling me about dangers. I can handle myself just fine, and I intend to explore this... place!" Marcus exclaimed. He didn't care that no one was around to hear him, he was just excited that he had a new area to explore. The kit's tail swayed from side to side eagerly, and with that he bounded off in search of anything interesting to explore. Who knew? Maybe Kara would follow him. He doubted it, but there was hope that somehow his timid sister would follow him. For the moment, though, Marcus was content to explore.
Anyway, here we go.YOUR BASICS
Name: Marcus
Alias: None available
Gender: Male
Age: 13 (human years)
Height: 1'3"
Weight: 19 pounds
Appearance: Marcus is a small red fox with scruffy fur, black-tipped ears, a white muzzle and chest fur, dark red paws, and a white-tipped tail.
Picture (optional):
He's the one on the left. The one on the right is his sister, Kara.
YOUR BACKGROUND
Mother: Vixey.
Father: Tod.
Any Siblings?: A younger sister named Kara.
YOUR PERSONALITY
Basic Personality: Marcus takes after Tod in that he is adventurous and mischievous, but he is also a bit naive and doesn't quite understand everything that goes on around him. He is kind, especially to his timid sister and friends, but is also known for having a bit of a temper. He means well, but more often than not his mischievousness leads him and his friends to getting into trouble. Marcus is also known for having a bit of a reckless streak. It is only because he cares about his friends that he is willing to put himself in danger should he ever find himself in it. It wouldn't be all that off to call him a bit cocky as well, thinking that simply because he is a fox he is able to get out of any sort of trouble thrown at him.
Likes: Adventure, exploring, his sister Kara, fish, and goofing around with friends.
Dislikes: Having nothing to do, rain, and anything having to do with romance.
Fears: Marcus doesn't fear much at this moment in time, but is wary of hunters as a result of Tod and Vixey telling him and Kara to avoid them at all costs. He is a bit mistrusting of humans as a result.
Hopes and Dreams: He longs to be a great explorer and travel the world with Kara.
Temperment: Most of the time Marcus is easygoing and more than willing to make a friend or two. He hardly is one to get into a fight, but if he is pushed past his limits he isn't afraid to let his temper flare. For the most part, though, those occasions are rare.
YOUR STORY
History: After Tod and Copper went their separate ways, Tod settled down with Vixey in the forest. They lived a happy life there, undisturbed for the most part and ready to start a family. Several months later, Vixey became the proud mother of two kits. The oldest was a male that Tod named Marcus, while the younger of the two was a female that Vixey named Kara. It was noted from Marcus' birth that the little kit seemed to be quite the mischief maker. This proved to be quite the case, as when he was old enough to start walking he began to sneak out of the den and go exploring in the forest, usually bringing Kara along with him to try and bring her out of her shell.
As Marcus grew older, his adventurous streak didn't seem to be crushed any. No, it seemed he only became more adventurous as he got older. He grew bored with the calm nature of the forest and wanted to see more of the world. Tod warned him about the world beyond the forest, saying there were humans beyond the safety of the trees and den that wouldn't hesitate to kill either Marcus or Kara. Marcus didn't quite understand, but promised he would keep an eye out for hunters and be wary of any new creatures he came across.
Marcus' adventuring led him far away from the safety of the forest one day, as he got past the barrier that divided the forest from the rest of the world and unintentionally hitched a ride on a car heading toward an unknown destination. As soon as the car stopped, Marcus got off and decided to explore the surrounding area. He came upon a vast expanse of water and, being curious as he was, decided to investigate. The water was a bit too strong for him and he soon found himself swept away, waking up hours later on a mysterious island. Marcus saw the occurrence as a chance to truly find out if he was a great adventurer or not, even without Kara by his side, and so he welcomes any challenge the island has to offer.
JUDGEMENT
Sample Post: Marcus groaned, feeling quite groggy from getting jostled about in the open water and really having no idea where he was. It took a few moments, but the kit soon realized he hadn't dreamed up his exploration away from the forest. This was real. Getting to his feet, Marcus shook the water from his fur and looked around. It soon became apparent that, much to his disappointment, Kara hadn't followed him. "Well, this is just peachy. What am I supposed to do now?" Marcus asked.
It then dawned on him. He was no longer in his familiar forest. He'd done good! "Ha! This just proves I was meant to be an explorer! I don't need mom and dad telling me about dangers. I can handle myself just fine, and I intend to explore this... place!" Marcus exclaimed. He didn't care that no one was around to hear him, he was just excited that he had a new area to explore. The kit's tail swayed from side to side eagerly, and with that he bounded off in search of anything interesting to explore. Who knew? Maybe Kara would follow him. He doubted it, but there was hope that somehow his timid sister would follow him. For the moment, though, Marcus was content to explore.
